Lets take a "trip" (part 1)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lithiumandweed, Nov 30, 2005.

  1. lithiumandweed

    lithiumandweed Member

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    Come with me my friends lets take a trip..

    Let us fill our cups with life and slowly take a sip...
    Let us journey through time our only luggage is our thoughts held captive in our minds..
    Lets let go, lets rewind..lets start all over and leave no one behind..
    Ill take care of you if you take care of me.
    Well say "fuck these bars" we will break these chains..
    Surrender to euphoria, at last freedom without pain..,
    Lets take this road and lets get lost, it seems our souls should cover the cost..
    There is nothing wrong with the way we live, and if i am wrong; there is a God whos job it is to forgive..
    We will watch the days as they melt together, as a circle of friends who pray this "trip" will last forever..
    The highways and biways it all makes perfect sense..
    To absorb it all behind closed eyes, suddenly life is more intense..
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    mm nice prose 'highways and biways' is a good phrase
     
  3. lithiumandweed

    lithiumandweed Member

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    thank you
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    This is what I see when I read your poem.

    What I feel is absolute agreement,
    a sense of urgency and nowness,
    a seizing, of life, with passionate excitement.

    I feel a co-creative dream, of intensity, manifesting.
    I think, in visions, of how beautiful this will be.

    Thank you for your sharings.
     
  5. lithiumandweed

    lithiumandweed Member

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    you always make me feel good and for that i thank you
     
  6. lithiumandweed

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    Weve gone beyond our peak so lets take the the test...\
    Lets survive coming down..self inflicted depression at its best..
    We wont fear the the truth we wont fear at all, and if were together in the end we wont fear the fall...
    We will bottle up our memories and label them "once upon a time"...
    NOt even this could of last forever we all knew it in the back of our minds..
    YOu see its easy to ignore reality with so many varieties of self-induced dreams, but its hard to be alone in a crowded room, in silence...
    When your thoughts become a chaotic roar and nothing is what is seems..
    So ....some of us will take the left , and some will stay to the right.
    Enivitably we will go our seperate ways we are all on different flights.
    Just know that what we found together...cannot be lost or found again..
    What comes next?..no one knows..
    So this is what they call life ......funny, here we thought it was the end...
     

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