Letter to my baby

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SoFarAway, Nov 28, 2005.

  1. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Driving down an anonymous road,
    don't know which way to turn.
    I've been driving on for years like this,
    with nothing but my life to burn.
    It's a winding slithering path,
    with shadows of those who've passed,
    frozen into the sands,

    My skin is cracking and sore,
    but with all this freedom I only crave more.
    I still havn't found my way baby,
    and I don't think I'm coming back,
    I havn't a place I call my home,
    and I won't stop 'til I have.

    Well I fell down again baby,
    and I'm running low on gas,
    try to move on, out on the run,
    so far from my path
    But baby baby baby baby,
    I can't help but think it was meant to be this way.
     
  2. floyd4peace

    floyd4peace Member

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    that was truly a lovely poem. quite emotional and well written.
     
  3. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Thank you
     
  4. GypsyPriestess

    GypsyPriestess Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    oh...I got chills...
     
  5. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Again, thank you
     
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