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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MistyMountainTop, Dec 4, 2005.

  1. MistyMountainTop

    MistyMountainTop Member

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    Fragmented light illuminates the ancient river,
    As the tide sings a song of the happy ghost,
    The ghost that will dance in the majestic moonlight as the snake begins to rise,
    This land is not to be touched, as the spirits stalk through the paradise of the neon light,
    Slowly the river expands and divides into different streams, which flow freely through this spacious jungle that is a dancing, dark eternity
     
  2. TreeFiddy

    TreeFiddy Member

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    this has a very beckoning, mystic feel to it, as if it were based on an ancient myth. thanks for sharing, i really enjoyed it!
     
  3. lithiumandweed

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    very enchanting and much enjoyed...
     
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