A new poem for you kind folks to look at

you can turn stars frigid
with that blue stare of yours
send the planets crashing down around you
and remain apathetic
as if the day is dull
and at night
retire by the flames
that dance for you
and watch the water
as it flows for you
and sigh with disgust
when your soul
turns its back on you


*I just can never come up with titles..or ever really think of giving my poems titles. It isn't even really inspired by anyone in general.

 

Its a good write as ever carl I put your freewebs link on my freewebs site if thats ok?

 

cool, I'll have to check yours out

 

hmm this makes me imagine that the water symbolizes her reflection as if shes looking face to face in a mirror, but the eyes dont exactly meet each other.
haha i like that part, i jus had to comment.