Infused with inexpressible passion...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SilverPenny, Jul 15, 2004.

  1. SilverPenny

    SilverPenny Member

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    Infused with inexpressible passion I lay and dream of you. Dying beneath my covers I aim to please, aim to release, fighting against my bonds. Deep breaths and passionate exhales as memories of intimacy score through my mind. Tease me through my memories, fleeting touches of endangered moments. I can’t help but crave the touch I was never given. Lunging towards hope I clutch at any chance, any opportunity. Like a butterfly with my bare hands; I’m impotent. Relinquish your hold on me, and release your own description of desire.
     
  2. SilverPenny

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    Woah! Barely anyone even read this! I'd love some opinions on it...
     
  3. fizzy_elf

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    eeps.


    thats mighty powerful stuff. nice.
     
  4. serra

    serra tentacle girl

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    very beautiful! passionate!! :)
     
  5. kahlil

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    Wow that was very evocative, hmmm i'm scared to see erotic but it was definetly sensory very sensory , i like it nice job!
     
  6. PureInnocence

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    Very beautiful. Deffinately has an erotic touch to it. I like your use of words.
     

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