SoFarAway's mind drop of the week

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SoFarAway, Jul 14, 2004.

  1. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    I'm gonna try to do this more often... here's something off the top of my head.

    I try to reach up, and touch the sky.
    I try to reach, but my arms are tied.
    My thoughts echo, like heartbeat.
    and it's so cold now, there's no heat.
    nuasea mind trips, and sickened heart,
    I try to think, just where did I start?
    My world is grey, not black and white.
    I have no sense, of wrong or right,
    faith is a crutch, which I dismiss,
    No one's diety, compares to your kiss.
     
  2. Purple_Burnt_Squirre

    Purple_Burnt_Squirre Member

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    wow I wish I could say more but that just take my breath away
     
  3. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Thank you.

    I truely appreciate it.
     
  4. SilverPenny

    SilverPenny Member

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    Love the last line. Really felt it.
     
  5. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Again, thank you.


    I'm actually really proud of that one, I'm gonna use that somewhere...
     

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