Im depressed at the moment. This is my first try on writing a poem. Please rate 1/10 (1 the lowest n 10 the highest) The night witnessed the love I felt for you when I met you you stole my soul. I though it was romantic you thought it was pure fate I miss you more than ever since you left. I hate being alone without your soul I miss you more than ever since you`ve gone. The shadows of the night undressed your soul showing something beautiful which only the angels saw. Even thought you are not here my life is now complete because I knew someone special who was so sweet. I love you... --------------------------------------- What do you think? i accept any type of criticism.
