an eyeful sore

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by teh-horace, Dec 8, 2005.

  1. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    an eyeful sore of giddy pleasure
    what can'st thou assume, i cannot measure
    for if thine eyes rest on lillies or daisies
    who's to say they're full of sillies or crazies
    an eyeful sore of ominous reproach
    though threadbare and laden with an honest man's toast
    to cause threatening distance in heel and high femur
    be'st any reason for the foolish one's misdemeanor
    an eyeful sore of inquisitive inquiry
    a pipedream intense of actions so wiry
    so think to yeself a question with delivery
    where on earth is there room for idyllic chivalry
    an eyeful sore of an eyeful blessed
    a beautfy unimagined and adorned nonetheless
    i'd rest mine eyes upon such a gilded face
    an eyeful sore in an ideal place
     
  2. yyyesiam2

    yyyesiam2 Senior Member

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    that's pretty good man.
     
  3. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    well thank you
    i'm thinking that some people won't understand it
    but eh, that's the beauty of poetry
    it can be interpreted however
     
  4. chillaxintoday

    chillaxintoday Member

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    they dont need to understand it... i like it
     
  5. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    There are so many eyes with which to see, that sometimes the empty socket is the best one to be, as it recieves, oftentimes, and projects through the Tree a blissful awareness of Possibility.

    :)
     
  6. sexyxsadie

    sexyxsadie Member

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    I don't know what it means, but I like it!
     
  7. MistyMountainTop

    MistyMountainTop Member

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    I dig it man. Nice imagery.
     
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