For a Moment

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GypsyPriestess, Dec 18, 2005.

  1. GypsyPriestess

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    For a moment,​
    Lost in you​
    I let myself hope​



    For a moment,​
    Wrapped in your warmth​
    I let myself believe​


    For a moment​
    Enveloped in your scent​
    I let myself fall ​



    For a moment,​
    While everything seemed perfect​
    I let myself love​



    Oh gods,​
    What I wouldn’t give​
    To be there again​



    For a moment​
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    Please let me know what you think about this one. I finished it in my sleep, and I'm not sure I like the way it turned out.​
     
  2. lithiumandweed

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    I watch the world go by in scenes.. Each scene a moment, each moment a single beat.. I hear the world all come together.. The world is life, and life the perfect rythym...

    something i have written that reminded me of you...i like your poem..well done
     
  3. GypsyPriestess

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    :D *feels all warm and fuzzy*
     

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