untitled (isn't that lame?)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by teh-horace, Dec 20, 2005.

  1. teh-horace

    teh-horace for your pleasure

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    what is the objectivity
    to the thought composed inside the fleshy capsule one calls home
    what is that you see
    through those amorphous globes of perception peering out into life
    when is life worth living
    all the god damn time
    why is life worth living
    because everything around you is not a dream
    everything you see is in fact reality
    out into the world your soul is floating
    don't let it leave you behind
     
  2. GirlInTheGreenGrass

    GirlInTheGreenGrass Member

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    I liked how you wrote of percieving, living, and waking up, and the conclusion that
    "out into the world your soul is floating
    don't let it leave you behind"

    Grap hold, reach out, and stay awake:)
    peace&love
     
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