Winter Solstice

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TrippinBTM, Dec 21, 2005.

  1. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    This is an old one of mine, from a few years ago. I'm posting it in honor of the winter solstice which occurs today/tonight.

    Winter Solstice

    To deepest black we run this night
    With winter setting in
    The frigid night engulfs my world
    Though I commit no sin

    But soon the dawn will come again
    To warm my freezing soul
    The inky dark will not so last
    As fire is brought from coal

    For from despair comes gleam of hope
    And light shall surely grow
    While in this time of deepest death
    Comes birth so soft aglow

    Yet slowly now it shall gain speed
    And all will feel its draw
    This blazing orb of purest light
    Our hearts exult in awe

    So rise up now and dance your joy
    Though cold it be outside
    Sun returns in blazing glory
    My arms are open wide
     
  2. GypsyPriestess

    GypsyPriestess Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    I love this sentiment!!!!! Though I like the whole piece a lot, this just strikes a chord with me:D
     
  3. standingdeer

    standingdeer Member

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    Very lovely, a great way to show your appreciation for the changing seasons.
     
  4. Corvuspirit

    Corvuspirit Member

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    you really caught the essence of how lovely this time of year is...every day is a little better than the one before...thanks for writing such a great poem.
     

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