oh dear lord.....i know someone has heard of the white canvas an artist put a hole in with a nail and sold it for millions...less can be more and you just have to find the point where the words reach you...brave move but beautifully done....
it has a kind of feeling, like no one will understand it until years after you die, and everyone will finally see how beautiful and wonderous your mind and words are.
Therefore you're saying one of the best if not the best contemporary Slovene poet isn't a poet at all? Well, he's one of the most famous today's European poets and he works in the states now, I think, and his poetry sounded very dumb to me at first, but thinking about it more it made me like it. I like this peace, and it has some meaning to me, but I really wonder what you meant behind these metaphores? (if it's not a joke, after all) Love, Borut
Tourtheviking2.....ah yes and your 16 and have been writing for oohh say 30 40 years??(smartass pun intended) once you mature in writing you can understand how stuff like this makes people sit and reread and wonder about it...
Even if I wrote a masterpiece you would not like it just because you do not like me as a person, which is rather idiotic since you do not know me besides one little forum on the internet. Anyway, my writing is not ment as a pretentious work of art nor would I call myself a poet. I just wrote down some words, perhaps with a meaning, perhaps not. To someone it might mean something, to someone else it might be rubbish. Love, bird.
you know some people go on and on and on trying to be impressive with their writing, but at least this poem doesnt try to mask it's lacking with length. sometimes a few words suffice in getting the point across.
