Untitled Random Thoughts

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SoFarAway, Dec 31, 2005.

  1. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Dragging this plow
    I keep dragging this plow
    through the earth's plates
    To let go is to give in
    and I always said I've make my own
    My own

    I built the walls that surround this mountain
    and I hide there deep within
    Plotting, planning, looking ahead,
    methods of attack and brainstorming my madness
    to unleash upon the likes of man

    The heaven's shall fall from the thunderous sound
    the governments crushed by the opposing iron fist

    Man shall be set free
     
  2. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    it's really good, i kept getting drwan to this till i finally read it. It's so god, the plough...saying that our body is the plough that that sows seeds, and reaps the earth... its really a wonderful idea. theres alot of anger and energy in it.. use it well !!
     
  3. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Thanks, I kinda forgot I wrote this, but I think it's going to become a song ... heh :)
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Hey now!

    Ok, lets here the rhythm...
    sounds great so far.
     
  5. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Don't worry when I get my website up with my writing and music it'll be in my signature. Then you can hear it.
     

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