untitled...

everything feels so out of my control
nothing i say holds any ground
i'm so lost and confused
it hurts when you're not around
i just want to love you
and not have to care about a thing
to be with you forever
that's why i gave you that ring
it just all hurts me so bad
when i have to worry about you
i care about you so much
these feelings aren't new
it hurts when i'm on the outside
but i know you can't let me in
you have to do it yourself
i just wish you'd begin
i feel like i'm slipping away
and there's nothing to hold onto
it angers me deeply
that for so long he has wronged you
he's clouded your vision
he's altered your perception
it hurts me so bad
that you believe his deceptions
it's caused so much distance
for us to be so close
but i'm willing to fight
through all of these tears and these woes
i will always be there
if you need to cry on my shoulder
i will love you each day
as we both grow older
please believe me
i promise to stick by your side
this is not our stop
it's just another part of the ride
babe, you are my world
and i'll do whatever it takes
i swear by Orion
and by love's sake
my love for you runs so deeply
and with that, please believe me

 

That was beautiful!

I hope she/whoever reads it.

 

woooooow... I loved that... you are really talented.. I always feel soo much emotion when I read your poems...

 

well i wish i wasn't feeling this emotion when i wrote it....