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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GirlInTheGreenGrass, Jan 16, 2006.

  1. GirlInTheGreenGrass

    GirlInTheGreenGrass Member

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    Hello, my name is Shame.
    I run all through her veins,
    I am the obscurity in her eyes, the motion to turn away.
    I am the one reminding her that she is always to blame.

    Hello, my name is Restraint.
    I dried all of her brushes so that she cannot paint
    I will not let her try, for I already know that she can't.
    Her mirror of dreams and translations, I like to smear and taint.

    Hello, my name is Regret.
    I echo old memories; and the new, to the side I set.
    I am a faucet of nostalgia, I stand above and keep her wet.
    I am her conscience of antiquity, I will never let her forget.

    Hello, my name is Light.
    I am her heroic lantern, I luminate paths of hope at night.
    I am the harbor above the shadows, the anchor and the kite.
    I am her flashlight to reality, while dark reflections of her I fight.
     
  2. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    So beautiful, I love how you've so effectivley personified these emotions.
    Keep it up!
     
  3. BrideOfLibertine

    BrideOfLibertine Member

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    I love this poem. Very good expression.
     
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