these streets

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by yovo, Jan 14, 2006.

  1. yovo

    yovo Member

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    Hobble tin roofs and humble mud walls
    Garbage strewn paths and cobble stone roads
    Colonial relics and gated villas
    Lazy courtyards and majestic green flora
    A comunity ebbed with tradition and lost in Western flash

    This is my village in a distant land
    These are my streets

    On these streets one smells:

    raw waste
    freshly sliced pineapple
    fumes of gas
    sweat
    charred fish
    and the desperate scent of time baking in the sun

    On these streets on hears:

    the haggling of prices
    the buzz of motorbikes and scooters
    the laughter of gabbing hairdressers and jovial mechanics
    the scurrying feet of uniformed school children
    and the silent anguish of a begger drowned out by a lively salsa tune

    On these streets one sees:

    A frenzied crowd with drums and sticks enticing a vodoun festish
    Tiny lizards on coarse cement walls basking in the morning light
    Dusty old dogs and sleepy babies napping in the solice of a shady siesta
    And an old man as he turns to face the distant mecca for prayor,
    his withered cattle grazing in a vacant lot

    On these streets one feels:

    The hands of curious children touching foriegn skin for the first time
    The overpowering heat and fatigue of a mid-day sun
    The red dirt of this mighty African contanent rubbing between toes
    And the truely vived sensation of being alive

    These streets:

    Held together by the rich history of this ancient land,
    and a struggle for life in this bold new world

    These streets:

    Live and breath through the comtotion of this daily performance
    It's actors well accustomed to this tale of cruel and beautiful humanity

    This is my village in a distant land
    These are my streets
     
  2. chappy>

    chappy> Member

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    absolutly beautiful

    great job, you my friend, can write.
     
  3. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    I could see everything as I read along, Yovo.

    This is an awesome piece!
     
  4. White Scorpion

    White Scorpion 4umotographer

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    Wonderful style. Great word chemistry!
     
  5. unlearn.and.be.free

    unlearn.and.be.free Guest

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    Lovely, lovely.
    I have seen this, these streets...so perfectly described... is this work inspired by Morocco, perhaps?

    Either way, great work! Thanks for sharing brother :)
     
  6. blackheartbitch

    blackheartbitch Member

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    so beautiful...i must say that you can write
     
  7. nakedundermyclothes

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    I loved it! You should post more!
     
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