sorry, i may be bombarding you guys with stuff, but i never really had people read anything i wrote and i wanted to just get some feedback this is part of a poem i started for a poetry slam at my college, lemme know whatcha think. I’m foolish for thinking my aspirations fulfill his expectations That my needs nearly not matter to the matter in his mind. For one second my heart takes, breaks, dilates to the tone of his vibrating voice Until the second short second where my hands shake, retake, misplace The fear in my body, that so boldly overtakes the conscious unconscious my mind tries to fake.
