Ode to Long Hair

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lover/young_peace, Jul 3, 2004.

  1. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

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    hee hee hee... its amazing the things you write at this hour.... oh ya so here goes.... it has a tune but i guess you are forced to improvise.... :)

    Joe knew it wasn't good for getting paid.
    Hard to find a job.
    But it certainly was excellant for getting laid.
    Easy to find a job. ;)

    Janey like to feel the summer air,
    Right next to her skin.
    So she ran real fast, let it blow through her hair,
    Long, dark-brown and thin.

    Anybody up for a haircut? (NO!)
    Boys? How about the girls? (NO!)
    Fine then. Keep your long hair then!
    Be it thin or all in twirls.

    Jim never knew what to do with his.
    So bushy. It looked quite a mess.
    He let it grow long; to his elbows, that is.
    Nature took care of the rest.

    Yes, Jim felt he had matured now.
    So he grew a beard just as long.
    His bangs fell down below his eyebrow.
    He couldn't see, yet still he rocked on!

    Anybody up for a haircut? (NO!)
    Boys? How about the girls? (NO!)
    Fine then. Keep your long hair then!
    Be it thin or all in twirls.

    Johnny's school told him to cut his.
    When it brushed the edge of his books.
    He told them "It's none of your business,
    What I do or how I look!"

    Anybody up for a haircut? (NO!)
    Boys? How about the girls? (NO!)
    Fine then. Keep your long hair then!
    Be it thin or all in twirls.


    hahaha..... there you go that one is only a few days old really have a blast when i write shit like this. i love long hair.

    ~~~~peace~~~~~
     
  2. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    LOL This is hilarious and great! I have long hair myself, and almost all my guy friends have recently cut theirs for jobs, comfort or court. (You don't wanna appear in front of the judge looking like a total hippie, now do ya? Especially for a marijuana charge! LoL) But you're right, long hair is GrOoVy so I'm glad you brought positive attention to it by writing this ode to long hair!!! :) Peace out and keep that pen moving no matter how goofy the subject seems to be.
     
  3. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

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    hehe, thanks.... i know how it is, my guy friend cut his hair (it was sorta long)... i begged him not to! i love long hair its really the best.

    ~~~rock on hip folks~~~
     
  4. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    LoL, I know... My boyfriend and my brother are the only long-hairs left!! Maybe 1 or 2 other friends, but in the past few months I know 5 guys who cut their beautiful long locks. :( Luckily, though, it's just hair so it'll grow back. Peace out!
     
  5. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    very unique, cool!

    and your other one reminds me of tom petty...!
     
  6. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

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    thank you.


    hmmm... tom petty huh??? well, okay, thanks, I'll take that! ;)
     
  7. pinocchio

    pinocchio Banned

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    That's funny!
    I guess I look more like Jim but my beard hasn't caught up to my hair yet!

    You should post more of your work, you have talent!!
     
  8. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

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    thanks very much! pinocchio, you're always such a smile-bringer! :)
     

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