Just Asleep

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TheLizardKingMike, Jan 21, 2006.

  1. TheLizardKingMike

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    Holding back
    Barred from entry
    I restrain myself
    My own progress is diminished

    Awaiting for the next stream of consciousness
    Or maybe not
    Maybe it’s placebo
    I haven't lost it at all
    I just think so

    I’ve still got it
    Try a little harder
    Burn a little brighter
    I am not dying inside
    Just asleep
     
  2. GirlInTheGreenGrass

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    I like your style of writing. I feel like this a lot. I blame it on my chronic pot smoking...:) I see you share the same respect. Don't hold yourself back. There are far too many other forces trying to do that. Keep sharing.
    peace&<3
     
  3. TheLizardKingMike

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    Thanks alot. This piece has to do with my writer's block. For a long time I felt like I had lost my ability to write poetry, but now I realize that I'm the one who says I've lost it. I'm the one who is keeping me from writing.
     
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    oh wow. I was somewhere else I guess. With my peice or something...:) How I percieved your poem and what you sent out were two completely different things. That makes for good poetry.
    Peace, love, and inspiration to you, friend.
     
  6. TheLizardKingMike

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    Indeed it does. Poetry means whatever you find in it. What did you get from it? If you don't mind me asking.
     
  7. GirlInTheGreenGrass

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    smoking too much weed everyday. I feel like I get nothing done. I'm sleeping inside. ;)
     
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