I want to work in a peanutbutterfactory

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  1. bird_migration

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    Copyrights by bird_migration. Story also by bird_migration.

    Introduction

    "Peanutbutter", yelled the big-headed manager of Peen-Ut, a big peanutbutterfactor in a land far away "Peanutbutter is made of peanuts."
    This is mostly true, however, a company named Narcisco is trying for many years to produce a peanutbutter without actual peanuts.
    Here is where I come in.
    Let me formally introduce myself. My name is Drem LeCourt. Happily married to Wendela and two kids on the way. Yes, we found out we are going to have twins. I work undercover for a private investigation company called Priv-At-I.
    I have no affiliation with peanutbutter whatsoever, but am eager to learn. Studied Lingual Science and Product Placement in university. My goal: to stop Narcisco from producing peanutbutter without peanuts.
    Operation Nuts is on the way!



    Hi, this is the introduction of my story. I hope you liked it and if so I can post the rest of the story. If not, so be it.
    Critics are more than welcome as I try to improve on my writing.

    Love, bird.
     
  2. cuba.girl

    cuba.girl Member

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    It's very good and nice.You just post it all.
     
  3. Rigamarole

    Rigamarole Senior Member

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    My head hurts from reading that. However I find the concept of working in a peanut butter factory AWESOME. Run with it man.
     
  4. White Scorpion

    White Scorpion 4umotographer

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    Go for it!
     
  5. Ingrid

    Ingrid Visitor

    Awesome, i'm looking forward to reading the rest :)

    Peace out,
    Ingrid x
     
  6. crummyrummy

    crummyrummy Brew Your Own Beer Lifetime Supporter

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    I am practically panting in anticipation.
     

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