random words or meaningful poetry?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by moonlight phoenix, Jan 26, 2006.

  1. moonlight phoenix

    moonlight phoenix Member

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    Beauty is one deep trip of fantasy
    Dream like a butterfly
    Take my soul and make me try
    to be something different
    but yet the same
    all rolled into one
    heaven not as far as you can see
    where the silence ends
    and the heart begins
     
  2. sleepy_d777

    sleepy_d777 Member

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    such heartfelt words are always meaningful........and its defintely poetry............don't stop writing ,sister!
     
  3. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    really beautiful words, i enjoyed it
     
  4. LordHelmet

    LordHelmet Member

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    very nice poetry, just because it is not necessarily uniform doesnt mean its not poetry, infact some of the best poetry is freestyle....
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Golden silences, full of heartbeats;
    inspiration takes flight, with dreaming wings.
     
  6. moonlight phoenix

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    thanks guys!
     
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