it's all jokes, it's all humour...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Jan 31, 2006.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    it's funny how,
    in a matter of days,
    not even days, hours,
    whole moods are suddenly shifted.

    it's funny how
    i was so stupid just
    a matter of days, hours,
    even seconds ago.

    it's funny how
    it hurts...
    right there. in the
    cerebral cortex and the heart.

    it's funny how,
    i let myself do it
    again. my letter box
    reveals a weight too heavy.

    it's not so funny...
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    i love this
    an insight to you..

    lovenpeace from saff

    keep writing

    just to add


    its funny how
    talent pours out
    as we pour though
    ourselves............
     
  3. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Hehe, what a lovely comment, thank you very much. :)

    love and peace to you, as well. :D
     
  4. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    wow, i so can relate to this, its all so true
     
  5. DreamChaser

    DreamChaser Member

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    I like your play on time-words.
     
  6. GirlInTheGreenGrass

    GirlInTheGreenGrass Member

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    Very raw and direct. :) thanks for sharing.

    peace&<3
     
  7. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    Thank you, everybody, I'm really glad you all enjoyed it. :)

    Peace to you all,
    James
     

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