i once laughed

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by LostOne, Feb 2, 2006.

  1. LostOne

    LostOne Member

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    I onced laughed at heartbroken men,
    Pouring their sorrow into songs and words,
    Only one with an unscathed heart could scoff at such pain
    Now I know,
    The unbearably, icy cold blade of withering emotions
    Slides between my armor, my protection.
    Sickly sweet memories flooding my conciouss at unwanted times,
    The liitle pieces of memerobilia found lying around in obscure places,
    The constant, fucking, questions.
    And yet I still remain hopeful only to be crushed repeatedly beneath the waves
    of her indifference.




    Fuck Love
     
  2. GirlInTheGreenGrass

    GirlInTheGreenGrass Member

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    "And yet I still remain hopeful only to be crushed repeatedly beneath the waves
    of her indifference."

    The whole poem spoke simply to me. I'm empathetic about all of this. :) Keep writing, and keep sharing. I like the way you flow
    peace&<3
     
  3. Icurus

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    Yes!, and enivitable cold reality unfortunately,
    well written, with a nice flow, an understanding from
    start, to finish....

    I good read,
    Devon Knight / Icurus
     
  4. Hippygurl2005

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    i'm not sure what u are describing in that poen lostone, but i like it, very deep..
     
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