One in a Million

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TheLizardKingMike, Feb 2, 2006.

  1. TheLizardKingMike

    TheLizardKingMike Members

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    One in a million
    A drop in a green ocean
    A grain of sand in an orange desert
    Empty faces
    Nothing at all
    It’s just a brick
    In the wall
    Division

    Assimilation
    No identity
    Or personality
    The establishment’s wet dream

    Force-fed knowledge
    Propaganda
    Eliminating free thought
    And art
    Human flocks of sheep
    Blind eyes
    Spirits now meek

    Do not give in
    Fight for freedom
    For all you love
    If you want to remain
    Alive inside
     
  2. sylvanlightning

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    A conscious drop is the ocean,
    A conscious grain is the desert,
    A conscious star is the jeweled sky &

    A conscious human is....
     
  3. GirlInTheGreenGrass

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    ....free to fight for love.

    This is my favorite poem of yours so far. I wish I had a guitar so I could set it to music. Then again, I wish I could play the guitar. :) 5 stars from me! Keep on being inspired, friend. You're good at it.

    peace&<3
     
  4. TheLizardKingMike

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    Thanks alot guys, this one is ok, I had a vivid message. But I don't think I conveyed it like I wanted to. This one could have been better, but it is what it is. Thank you for taking the time to read and reply to my poems. I really do appriciate it.
     
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