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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Mr_squirrel, Feb 9, 2006.

  1. Mr_squirrel

    Mr_squirrel Member

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    an almost happy ending
    to an almost lovely story
    thats almost filled with beauty
    that fills you when your empty
    i almost read it to you
    when you almost had the time
    i almost made it half way
    when you stoped me in midline
    i almost poored my soul out
    when i almost had a cup
    im almost too far down
    to even think of looking up
    this is almost over
    and im almost on my own
    i am almost happy now
    but im almost all alone
     
  2. psychadelicbird

    psychadelicbird Member

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    Loverly. Sad, depressing, makes me want to cry but still it is loverly. Now just fix your spelling and capitalization and it will be perfect. Yep.

    Much love,

    Bird
     
  3. Mr_squirrel

    Mr_squirrel Member

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    lol you know what? you can just fix my spelling for me sometime. i think i might give you the passwords to all my sights and let you corect all you want. lol
     
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