solitary on the contrary

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by inbloom, Jul 21, 2004.

  1. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    oh, you look so alive
    and you feel it in your bones
    it cuts you from inside,
    and it won't leave you alone
    and you're fighting by yourself,
    you just can't gain control
    closing eyes and fading health,
    now you're just a dying soul

    witness to the empty hand
    shadows stain the page
    fill your jar with faces
    and keep it closed with hate
    i am sick, i am cynical
    i've been waking up at night
    everytime it starts to fade
    i can feel another bite
     
  2. inbloom

    inbloom as the crow flies...

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    fer faaaawk's sake. *bump*
     
  3. water_dreamer

    water_dreamer I

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    i REALLY like this
     
  4. sunkiss672672

    sunkiss672672 Member

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    your poems are really amazing
     
  5. lucyinthesky

    lucyinthesky Tie Dyed Soul

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    woah, this one's amazing. you're so....grrr!!! i love this.
     
  6. Brian

    Brian Guest

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    That's very...interesting
     

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