Exploring the floor

I'm a writer not a "drawer" but I thought I'd share this drawing I did while high to see others opinions sorry its not a very big pic!

 

um, i can't really see it. your lines are too light and are all the same. maybe some different marks and darker pencils would help, but like i said, it looks all white to me. unless this is a joke and there isn't really a drawing there.

 

no its not a joke, but I'll try and see if it can make it clearer in paint or something

 

ok. cool. i'd like to see it. maybe my contrast just needs to be adjusted though.

 

its a nice "1 minute" drawing to me, the position on the paper is well done.

 

now in colour but haven't figued out how to make it bigger...

 

Stick to writing.

 

i like it cuz it's stylized, but you could use a class or so. no offense.

 

If you use photoshop or something like that,just resize it - I'd like to see it - I find for example peoples music - who have never played an instrument before - totally refreshing cos they are not limited in expression and not hung up on technique which can be a trap.Thats why I like to leave off creating stuff for ages and then come back to it as if it is a first time discovery again.If you get inspired then thats all that matters - some die never having experienced that.

 

Infact - fuck 'em - get it printed on the side of an airship then we'll personally fly it across America then around the world.I'll join yer and I'll print one of my paintings on the other side - you can read some of your prose through the on board PA system and I'll play the guitar and keep the beer chilled.Howz about that - I'm inspired.