Icarus Plastique

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by static_crash, Jul 26, 2004.

  1. static_crash

    static_crash Member

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    As humble as egos,
    ..That rise like empires,
    and muscle through the subway crowds.
    These nylon icons!, our rehashed heroes,
    who proclaim their noble truths aloud.
    ..that rattle chains from knoll and window,
    as they bare their bloodied souls to 'yan',
    who scratch at floorboards,
    and gnaw at ankles,
    and scorch their wings upon the sun
     
  2. tripRBYday

    tripRBYday Member

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    Very well written, comma's work as sufficient pauses though.
     
  3. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    Love it!
    Nylon icons of consumer nation. Nice!
     
  4. Musikero

    Musikero Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    Bravo (applauds loudly)!
     

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