a night without stars

take me away to a night without stars
so we can jump and create our own
the thump of our heartbeats wakes love from its sleep
wild laughter from chldren's bellies
coat the ground with our reflection
dance. faster
dance, harder
beauty. it has been asleep for so long,
that no one remembers it
let's play among the angels
and use the moon as a stepping stone
We'll sink so deep into the night
that no one will ever find us.

 

I like it, it has an energy too it, pulls you along to the end, exhilarated. Excellent images too

 

s' lovely... captivating

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i know our love will never die like the phone
when i feel the presence of your love i know i'm home
we are just completely meant to be
like a door and a door frame
without the frame the door would not open
without the door there would be nothing to open
you are the door and i am the frame
i opened the door and found love
your the window your the door
that has opened me to love
if it wasn't for doors and windows
i would have never known outside
if it wasn't for you
i would have never known love

 

LOVE IT morrison

 

so much energy, images..lovely!!

 

Well done. Great flow, rhythm and vibrancy....
sweeps you along in the strong current.

 

yes i tried to create a dream like place, so u could have plenty for ur imagination to play with.

 

very nice work.....the flow of the verse works real well