Hit the ground crawling

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marquis_de_odde, Mar 22, 2006.

  1. marquis_de_odde

    marquis_de_odde Member

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    Lost in a sea
    Of money
    And missions
    Lies
    Greed
    Filth

    Trying to discern
    Where I should be
    Who I should be
    Why I should be

    I'm alone
    We all are really
    It's a terrifying realization
    Can't tip toe round the shadows
    Can't trick them with a reflection
    Just gotta let them get you
    Once they've had their way they'll go

    Sitting in a foreign room
    With an accumulation of crap
    Was it ever mine?

    It's pain
    Degredation
    Oceans of tears
    A pit of fiery resentment
    A battle of wills

    Will I survive this?
     
  2. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    Very beautiful, haunting in some ways. Its scary to feel disoriented and alone in the world, a feeling I've recently become very familliar with. Keep up the good work!
    Peace,
    Rob
     
  3. Ganja_Goo_Ninja

    Ganja_Goo_Ninja the penis mightier

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    That was really awesome :) Thanks much for sharing.
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    An unchanged channel is haunting indeed,
    between each is the static of shadow and light,
    can we simply tune into the color mixture which really inspires us....

    let the rest drift away like unsupported dreams.
     
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