So Lost.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dietcoketree, Mar 30, 2006.

  1. dietcoketree

    dietcoketree Member

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    it is so cold here without you

    the birds seem to cry when they sing and the stars seem to mope.

    ive allowed everything about me to become about you
    and now that your gone, im lost. i am so lost.

    i miss your smile, the way you laugh.
    i even miss the way you yell when your mad,
    the way your eyebrows raise when your trying to figure out whats happening around you.
    i love the way your reckless, but the safest person i know.
    i love the way you sleep, the way you dread the light.

    i need to have you back again;
    to feel how much you care while you play with my hair.
    i miss your voice that soothes like aromatherepy
    and the way you try to sing because you know i love to hear it.

    i hear our song, i see our place. i smell your scent, feel your hair.
    i taste your skin, and feel myself stripped of all cares.

    wont you come back so the birds can sing? so my heart can beat?
    darling, im so lost.
     
  2. skyyy420

    skyyy420 Member

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    Damm that shit makes me depressed-it was good though:)
     
  3. jahsun

    jahsun Member

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    Don't be so sad, Jah will guide everything in our lives if we be true. You will someday have a beautiful family and love will abide. jahbless
     
  4. sunshine and pearls

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    nice concrete imagery in places here. good poem.
     

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