natures tears

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  1. iscreamchocolate

    iscreamchocolate Senior Member

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    Natures tears
    By Damaya


    Lying orbitly,
    Amongst flowers.
    The rain is bickering,
    and my skin is moist.
    Soaking up my hair,
    as if a sponge.
    Running my hands
    Over my unclothed,
    Washed up body.

    My eyes shut,
    My consciousness
    unthinkable.
    Hair is damp
    and lies in clumps.
    The fragrance
    Of the flowers,
    of the rain
    blended togeather.
    I then gaze up
    towards the clouds,
    an opening appears.
    The light
    Behind the clouds,
    glisten's through.

    My belly flat,
    Breasts smoothen
    themselves out.
    One dribble of rain
    starting at my lips,
    Trickling down to my chin,
    and downhill,
    Into my belly button.
    My body is bathed,
    In Natures tears.

    I bring myself up.
    I gather my thoughts,
    That's when I realized.
    I am sitting orbitly,
    amongst flowers.
     
  2. Tye_DyeBrain

    Tye_DyeBrain Member

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    Hey i really dig your poem...it made me think of Alice In Wonderland in the beginning where she is singing laying in the flowers....man i always wanted to be completely hidden laying in a feild of wild flowers!! Rock on
     
  3. iscreamchocolate

    iscreamchocolate Senior Member

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    haa haaa... i've always wanted to be lying in the middle of a bunch of flowers when it rains.. lol haaa haaaa... thanks for digging my poem :p
     
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