Blaze

On unbalanced legs
I waddled my way
to a bed, hospitalized
to perform the miracle
of you.

You came to me
hair blazing
like a pagan
of old Irish tales
and set yourself
at the alter breast.
I feasted on your
features, a perfect
delicacy to behold.
As old as ruin stone
prophecy, we were fasted
for eternity.

As days and years pass
your vines of laughter
and tears grow around
my heart, and I wonder
how you will ever
start some new branch
away from me
for I have no plans
to be untangled from you.

 

I really liked this,especially the end,it's sadly beautiful

 

i liked this a lot.. beautiful is the only word that comes to mind when trying to describe it

 

thank you both so much for your encouraging comments.

 

wow.

I feasted on your
features, a perfect
delicacy to behold.


this was my fav part. what a sharing

 

Absolutely beautiful. This is one of the best poems I've read on here.

 

thank you all so very much.

 

It`s really beautiful and affecting~