Sword of Righteousness---my recent poem

Ancient legend told us,
The thousands years' ice,
Sealed the invincible sword,
Which once had killed all vice,
Then kept unreachable since human discord.

For years humans produced counterfeit,
Torturing innocent souls by deceit,
The real one lying in unbreakable ice.
Its shine drives away all the ambitious mice,
The ones who follow greedy advice.

The shine is never to wane,
The owner is said to be insane,
But righteousness is destined to him.
The one with no earthly stain.

 

Are you really a Chinese? Unbelievable,but your peom is excellent
+U

 

Thanks, yea I am Chinese. I was born in a city next to Hong Kong.

 

very good imagery nicely done. keep on.

 

Hi,trobadour,would you mind if I publish your poetry onto one of my own forums--the forums of Beijing Normal University.(Maybe people not in China cann`t access to this website because our website cann`t connnect to the International web users,it`s a restricted webstie only for people who use Chinese Education Net)
Maybe many students will enjoy this poem.

 

Sure you can publish them. also, tell your students about our ideas of freedom, democracy, and the coolness of being a hippie.

 

sure to do that, and they love freedom,too.

 

thanks arthur