Worry Not and it's sequel A night with my mind

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Jack Straw, Apr 12, 2006.

  1. Jack Straw

    Jack Straw Member

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    Worry not

    I caught my mind
    wandering out of my house
    late at night
    far into the AMs

    Where he was going
    I know not
    I worry not
    He needs his space too

    Everyone has secrets
    He dare not share
    Everyone needs seclusion
    Perhaps over there
    I know not where he is heading
    And I do not care
    For he'll learn from experience
    And grow from wear and tear

    I know he'll be back
    From wherever he has gone
    with wisdom born from experience
    sharing the plans he's drawn

    and so I await his return
    as time fades
    spring becomes summer
    and my days now wane

    I hope he comes back
    Before I expire
    I miss my mind so
    and I'm growing tired

    But I worry not
    And kneel to fate
    Is that him over the horizon?
    No? I wait.

    A night with my mind
    a sequel to Worry not

    What a glorious time
    a time to drink wine
    a time to unwind
    and a time to be kind
    In these times
    I most miss my mind

    One beautiful midsummer's evening
    A vagrant wandered into my yard
    Happy, but scarred

    "What is your name", I inquired
    "Ah, you don't remember me, you look tired"
    "Tired I am,
    Are you friend?"

    As he replied with wit
    nostalgia hit
    "Fool I am your mind
    Can I unwind?", I nodded
    And he drank some moonshine
    "Let me show you what I've acquired
    tell what's transpired
    You'd really love to hear."
    I had to wipe a tear
    from my the corner of my eye
    and I looked to the sky
    He had returned at last
    Adjectives he'd surpassed

    I finally replied
    "Of course, your my mind"
    Instantly he cried,
    "I missed you old friend,
    can you remember when
    we read On the Road
    and you told
    and scold-ed
    me for my material tolls
    You don't need those needs!
    you would decree
    you said you'd live carefree
    and make sure to see
    not just look but see,
    oh, to gasp at the trees

    well I have seen
    wondrous things.
    lived out man's dreams
    seen new beginnings
    I've lived it all
    watched empires fall
    I've danced with the stars
    have you a guitar?"

    How he changed it's hard to pinpoint
    He then smiled, "Care for a joint?"
    I chuckled and agreed
    and so he lit the weed
    and passed it down to me

    We talked long into the night
    companions reunited what a sight
    a night with my mind
    enlightenment you'll find
    perhaps the divine kind
    had become mine
    when dawn arrived
    I had died,
    satisfied.
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    That was pretty amazing. The first had this patient, almost dreamy feel to it, the second really sprung to life; in each case, exactly what kind of feeling you'd expect in each situation. Finely crafted :)
     
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