Psychedelic 60's poem! Behold!

This poem is a paady off of the poem "If..." by Rudyard Kipling into my own version:Enjoy!

If we could fly into the sky with a bunch of hippies...Would you go back to earth and destroy the gypsies?If you could answer a question like that...​

Would you bite the head off a bat?Like Ozzy Osbourne?​

If you could go back in time...Would you turn Ronald Reagan Into A mime?​

If you could go inside a time machine...would you go​

to woodstock or in John lennons dreams.....?​

If you could go back to stop hendrix's addiction...Would you save​

save Joan Baez in addition? If you could crack​

the conspiracy of Richard M. Nixon...Would you try and stop​

the vietnam war friction? ​

If you could take the wierd smile of Jimmy Carter, would you take ​

it shape it or make it Eisenhowers? If you could choose to​

be stuck in a decade...Would you inhale its methane? If you could​

choose to stay in a time? Would it be the 60's or current 2006?​

With the 1999 crisis of y2k delirium? That prophsied​

the new millenium?Psychedelic?Maybe...​

Peace and Love....Not until the man is gone.....​

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Wha'd ya think? ^_^

 

I like it..and my answer to everything would yes, except the Joan Baez one...i don't know about that.

 

Thanks!^_^

 

I like pudding.

 

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i like your poem. we can travel to the past, in my case, a perception door i call feeling.
probably sadnes o depression opens a door, some kind of portal that works when you close your eyes

 

That's an amusing poem.It has a kind of rhythm to it.It's very 'Edward Lear' gibberish-type poem.Good stuff!.

 

Thanks flight and duende! Duende makes valuable points about our mind value. Especially if youre 13 like me. lol

 

I need more soy milk.

 

pretty deadly man ^_^

 

Thank you all...so much! T_T *sniffle*

 

what does joan baez need to be saved from?

 

8/10, nice work

 

I think it's really cool. The last lines about y2k and peace and love said somthing to me

 

Thank you! And to think 1 13 year old wrote this...