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Message In A Bottle


Hello, how are you?

You can’t hear me now

Thought I was strong all along

Without you I am so ..so lost

But I …

I am like a message

in a bottle

…waiting to be found

by you again

…waiting to be found

by you again



This I must confess

We are better

together

I heard your last words Ooooo

….“I Love you”

Now all I have is

tears full of this truth

What’s a memory

if it’s without you?

And I

I am like a message

in a bottle

….waiting to be found

by you again

…..waiting to be found

by you again



I can’t pretend

There is only hope

that destiny brings me

back…

brings me back

to you

…….again ( whisper )

K

April 2006

 

The lyrics are very beautiful,,im sure the melody is too.

 

They're good but i couldn't get the "Genie in a Bottle" tune out of my head.

 

err the word bottle lol must have done it ..

 

where you write
I can’t pretend

There is only hope

that destiny brings me

back…

you may wanna replace back with ' to the end ' cause it rhymes better with pretend

 

hmmmm I like that .. I shall possibly try that one out .. .kudos ... thanks .. !!