On a Daily Basis *imput please*

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by lilylove, May 6, 2006.

  1. lilylove

    lilylove Member

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    *Any input. I need to send something to my brother who is far away and struggling. I like it, but it is because I understand it. Any input, I usually don't do this.*

    On a daily basis I see it,
    I watch it,
    Like some sort of being john malchovich"
    Like I am it,
    But not participating
    Back and forth I feel the tug of posessing and insight
    Of feeling,
    And having it pull on your arm and your heart
    When I dance I cannot see what you mean
    When I run from sane to impulsive like some baseball game
    I will steal your base
    I will call you out
    I will run
    And like it
    I will soak up the unknowing and scary
    I will ignore deeper things to deal with situational things
    I will throw the bottle
    And run the tab
    I will sing all of your songs
    And know the lyrics
    I will connect with you in a way you have never expected...
    because I know what it is like
    On
    A
    Daily
    Basis
    To feel like you
     
  2. l00l

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    I think the verse is really neat. Are you a songwriter?
     

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