On Human Foolishness

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TrippinBTM, May 22, 2006.

  1. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    On Human Foolishness

    (i)
    She wanted Nature's way to be
    lions and lambs at play in glee
    frolicking in fields of flowers,
    some idiot utopian fantasy.

    She couldn't deal with blood or death
    and so condemning ran outside
    to quell the grackle's gristly work
    and o'er the sparrow stood astride,

    horrified by what she saw
    her foolish worldview knocked askew
    (and meanwhile there upon her stove
    simmered slowly her beef stew).

    Then she stood there sad and silent,
    at a loss and looking 'round
    while contemplating what to do
    with the wounded on the ground.

    (ii)
    And now I'm crouching here and holding
    this rock suspended o'er my head
    looking down, both grim and grieved,
    the bird lay shaking, nearly dead.

    Reaching down, I stroked his back
    "I'm sorry" I said softly to him.
    My heart beat fast, I took a breath,
    and let the stone fall hard and grim.

    (iii)
    If only she had let the grackle
    do his work on Nature's terms
    for now this bird dies pointlessly
    to feed not wings, but only worms.
     
  2. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    Excellently Expressed.

    MMMMM... BEEF STEW!

    :)
     
  3. pagansrule!

    pagansrule! Member

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    Freakin awesome man! The way you depict nature and emotions is so vivid, it brings the work of Wiliam Blake to mind. Excellent!!
     
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Wow, that's flattering, especially given how much I admire Blake. Very kind of you to say, and thank you too osiris. :)
     
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