Mini things

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Woodstock_Blazer, May 19, 2006.

  1. Woodstock_Blazer

    Woodstock_Blazer Member

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    I'd like to be closer to me,
    But that life is like poetry,
    Controlled and yet so bold,
    Cant I see?
     
    Woodstock_Blazer, May 19, 2006
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  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    I don't know what it is about this piece that I like, save that for all it's briefness it has blown my mind. I love it. :D
     
    TrippinBTM, May 19, 2006
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  5. lady_dreamcatcher

    lady_dreamcatcher Local Cannibal

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    aye, agreed. it has set my mind to thinking, and that is never bad! tank you so for sharing this wonderful (yet... brief... tee hee) piece. blessings
     
    lady_dreamcatcher, May 23, 2006
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  7. Woodstock_Blazer

    Woodstock_Blazer Member

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    Ok then here's part 2:

    They said women will use you
    and men will abuse you
    but only you can choose
    what this will lead too...
     
    Woodstock_Blazer, May 26, 2006
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