Before its too late

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by marleylover9, May 14, 2006.

  1. marleylover9

    marleylover9 Member

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    Soon they'll be gone

    We'll need to stand up
    We...the youth
    Are the future
    Lets not follow
    In they're footsteps
    Lets start a revolution
    What they're doin' isn't workin'
    We know whats up
    We see whats down
    They say we're free
    I disagree
    All nations should be one
    Put down your weapons
    Drop your guns
    Greed has replaced peace
    Indeed
    Don't care about your neighbor
    Just the fame
    Its a shame
    Who's to blame?
    The time will come
    Rivers dried up
    Cus' we didn't change
    We'll be gone our families
    Will suffer
    Not seeing the gifts
    That God had made
    The gifts we regifted
    Took and shifted
    Its time to step up
    To the plate
    Change the world
    In a positive way
    Before its too late
     
  2. rainbowedskylover

    rainbowedskylover Senior Member

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    i agree.
    can't find out if you were desperate writing this stuff or if wanna throw your message/opinion into the world. anyway there are a lot of things that should be improved and there is a lot intiative out there. it only needs support, you know
     
  3. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    Consider very carefully the meaning of the word "revolution" before you so hasten to starting one.

    :)
     
  4. lady_dreamcatcher

    lady_dreamcatcher Local Cannibal

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    yes, think hard before you act. but i love (and completely agree with!) the sentiment and message behind this. also, great rhythm and flow. tanks for sharing!
     
  5. HippieFlowerGirl67

    HippieFlowerGirl67 Banned

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