I can never tell with the things i write... what do you think? I 've got plenty of time to be dead that's my drugs and love and talking but I dream a lot in bed some nights after i burn out all the lights I meet the people who i know and talk like i think they understand and then i wake up on someone's plate more time to lose control and oooh I just can't wait I've got nothing inside of my head that's my drugs and love and talking today I watched some christians sing just all about death coming but I had to wait there for a lady bringing gifts and hanging round maybe and I tell myself you always got to wait but i gave up when she was forty minutes late When I have nothing to say, I say it loud with my guitar When I have nowhere to go, I go with the beat in my chest I don't want to look like I'm somewhere to hurt someone but I can't hold onto cares when I look dumb to everyone fear tastes like scarecrows on my tongue while your words fly out fine my thoughts cower feeling safe above circling in my mind and sweating's not that bad to be a nobody out of eyes and melting's not that bad to be in blankets woven from the sky I hold my breath in cause this air's nice In thirty seconds I fall up into the lights I've got nothing inside of my head that's my drugs and love and talking every word that i hear feels useless coming in from minds all truthless And I think too late into night and sure i already feel alright but lets smoke clovers before the dawn flip on the porchlight and put sunglasses on
i can't put my finger on just what it is about this piece, but i really really like it! you have some excellent lines in here talk like i think they understand and then i wake up on someone's plate When I have nowhere to go, I go with the beat in my chest fear tastes like scarecrows on my tongue every word that i hear feels useless coming in from minds all truthless but lets smoke clovers before the dawn flip on the porchlight and put sunglasses on loved all of those! tee hee but i almost felt like the ending left me hanging... like i was expecting to read that's my drugs and love and talking again. *shrug* oh, well. that may just be me! really enjoyed this, man! tanks for sharing!
