Lol... here goes Woodstock was... Open hearts and open skies Open love an open eyes Dreamers, poets, peace and love Strangers, friends and God above Tie-dye, beads and crazy cars Outstanding shows by CCR Children of the sun and moon Knee-high mud, a Hendrix tune Music from a famous band sparks Unity throughout the land Saving souls and freeing minds It opens hearts that once were blind Can you read the signs? Fellowship and freedom ring once Everybody starts to sing and' Starving souls are satisfied Ten-thousand tears that now have dried I can almost hear the sounds of Visions past that now are found A sun that slowly sets on me Living, loving, creating, at Woodstock. Hehe
WOW! i'm impressed. usually, that kinda thing just doesn't work for me, but this... very well done! smooth and well metered... bravo!
That was perfect! Excellent flow, many acrostics sound forced but this sounds like it was just written then, lo and behold, it happened to form an acrostic too. Only issue was the last two lines didn't rhyme, but I'm willing to look past it
I just had to find the right way to end it It was part of a project we did for school. We had to make a poetry book, and I had to include Woodstock in it lol