wow jester... i must say, you annoy the hell outta me at times but that was very good! do you write regularly? if not, you should, your very good with words.
i didnt see it coming the wind changed much too fast i remeber seeing you smile no regard for the past i can still smell your breath though i havnt felt it for a while i wonder if it will all be over if one day we could look back and sigh i saw you standing there disbeleving mixed with fear the very last moment when you were standing there i recal the sound the cracking of the bat the way you fell to the ground the way the sun fell down
I thought 'Joviality' through it off, and not only cause I don't know what it means , it just doesn't fit well with all the other, much more common words other than that it's really good really strong emotion, really nice flow
i have to agree with dietcoketree, usually i find you a tad annoying ~~~~ but this is amazing writing you have a gift man use it wisely. peace & love, twist
