there are some gramatical issue with this that sort of make it difficult to read, but i dig the vibe it sends! it almost sounds... unfinished. like you just stopped writing it before you got to the end. i'd love to read a bit more! and the title seems a bit harsh, just because of the mood the poem sets. overall, however, i enjoyed reading this. keep it up, and i hope to read more!
ahhh! so i see! well, silly, tell me that next time! haha thanks for the explanation, man, it really brings this more into focus. blessings~
