Dear Adam

this is a poem i wrote when my brother left me without saying goodbye. its in my book.

You're so far away
But I can still feel you
The way you left
Tore my heart into
It seems like you dont care
But I pray that you do
This abandonment
Still haunts me
I can't seem to forget the pain
And all the tears
I cried for you-
Are all in vain
Because
You're never coming home

 

woops my mistake lol blonde moment

 

wonderfully blunt and straight to the point. excellent read, this, my friend. tank you for sharing!

 

i like it and who cares about grammar/spelling
i've seen alot of published poems with mistakes
it doesn't matter
you should have just said it was intentional

 

Your poem is very touching. It is heart felt and very sweet.

 

thank u guys. i wanted it to really express how i felt when he left, because it broke my heart. so i thought i was make kind of nieve and to the point, because thats how i felt