Space Car Rider

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by God, Aug 5, 2004.

  1. God

    God Member

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    Kiwi, jumbo-jet flyer
    space car rider


    we've erected castles
    on the ashes of ancients
    where is the king that
    once ruled the land?
    Head down, lying
    face down, buried in the sand

    and will you be a knight
    will you believe in the sight
    when will the clouds of darkness clear
    who will be the bringers of the light?

    Her car flies in space
    an eternal empty lace
    of jokes, strings, dreams

    her eyes glow lime green
    maybe just not what they seem
    her mouth opened laughing
    green grass of sun
    such a lot of fun
    to be here today
    c'mon, here's the way

    relax your eyes
    relax your mind
    forget the lies
    drift back in time
    and you will see
    just what I mean

    and now you know
    and now you go
    and now you see
    and now you be
     
  2. the zen-man puck

    the zen-man puck Member

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    wow, that was very good, in the poem you had some very good imagy, what can I say I like it.
     
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