Moving On

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by peace06, Jun 1, 2006.

  1. peace06

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    We go through life wonderin passing the time away. some people stay while others leave. We laugh we cry we learn and we live. Each setting our own course and taking our own chances. Never do really really know if the path we took was the right one or where all the time was spent. As we look back do we forgive or forget? do we still hate the hurt or learn and move forward? Do we hide what we have done wrong to try and find a better future? Is there a path already laid there before us and forks in the path are set so there is some choice of our own. Each thought each sound each memory building on us. The past memories become faint while new ones take form. Its impossible to feel the past to taste the time of it all. You hear a voice that calls you to rememberance. The faint cry of what went wrong. You learn to love to live again. Training yourself to trust and chance again. All in the while you know the past can repeat itself. You learn to work harder to achive what you want. You push yourself to achive higher and better goals than the ones you set. All in the while still pondering if yo have done the right thing. as time goes on you laugh about the pain of the past like it wasnt that bad. You know u will try your hardest to make light of it. At least for everyones sake. As we sit in the future how do we tell we are better? Do we know by where we are and who we are with? As time grows shorter we finally realize what we were looking for and why we have traveled so far to achive it. We realize to get to that point we have sacraficed it all and no choice was a bad one. So we laugh we cry and we move on...............


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