Eye in the sand

I see, see
sea!
eye in the sand
and sleep

Oh I dream
dream!
eye in the sand
storm interrupts
my morning

I saw, saw
mill!
splintered my brain
and again
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Sounds painful.

 

Very inventive if not agonizing in its implications. Well done!!

 

i love this

 

this confuses me, but that is exactly what i love about it, it makes me think, well done

 

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Almost like a zen koan: so discombobulating that it leads to a sort of satori. I like it but don't know why.