I wrote this one night, I think i was drunk and on Salvia

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sitareric, Jun 29, 2006.

  1. sitareric

    sitareric Banned

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    "
    Dead to the wings on my back"​

    I want to bleed, and cut myself open.
    I want to fuc, my cock is like destiny.
    I want to touch people, a billion infinite infinite nucleuses I never saw.

    I want people to touch me, burns on my back no one ever sees or my soul in my eyes.
    I'm tired of the global lock, I die.
    I don't want to sleep, while the "jungle" beats I'll stay alive tonight.
    I'll stay awake to see te sunrise in your arms, yet i don't know who you are.

    Sometimes id rather die than move on,
    Living alone, I know i'll never conform.

    The Bleeding Cuts on my back, Like the bleeding heart of the sun. Like a sign, It's a miracle i'm alive.

    the cycle a chain unbroken, you've never closed your eyes, non stop mind.

    I'll see the sunrise again, maybe i will. I could never sleep, my life is like dreams. Say no the answer is yes. Show me something everlasting.

    Or is it me?

    Will i ever breathe the life?

    I am not Satisfied.
     
  2. Duck

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    I like it
    It's one of those things that seem like they have a really deep meaning, but you can't really make sense of it

    maybe if I read it whilst on Salvia I'll figure it out :D
     
  3. sitareric

    sitareric Banned

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    Yeah, Theres a subtle factor that ties it all together, that once in a while ill feel, i was trying to express it.. Its just that it isnt totally rational
     
  4. plume7reaction

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    the visionary is like a knife...sharp...which makes it more powerful. i like.
    sometimes being drunk can really bring out your tru emotions i think
     
  5. Tamee

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    yes, but that's a bit tricky
     
  6. x_WaX_x

    x_WaX_x Member

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    "I'll stay awake to see te sunrise in your arms, yet i don't know who you are."

    love that
     
  7. Tamee

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    that's the part that really caught me, too.
     
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